Made in fall 2011 for my undergraduate application to SCA @ USC.
Prompt for the piece was something like this:5-page scene in screenplay format about two people who live together, one of whom wants to go out, while the other wants the first person to stay in. Emphasize visual elements.
After doing this, I started using these two characters (at an earlier point in their relationship) for other little scenes and sketches for class.
Feedback is loved
Possible areas for feedback:- Do the visuals contribute to the story in a meaningful way for you? (Or do they seem like filling?) How so? Other visual-related feedback?
- How is the pace? (Keep in mind that in some parts you're reading information consecutively that would be processed audiovisually and simultaneously.) Particularly: pace of plot development via dialogue?
- Please let me know if I've screwed up on formatting, etc. Still pretty new to screenplays!